Undead with Two Heads

 

Hey everyone, my first post on this sparkling new site :] 

Comments

[William B. Hand]

I remember this 'un from your ca.org sb thread. Great creature! The plop of intestinal length totally makes the pic for me (not to mention the rest of the pic). I'm also partial to the gassy, buggy, emissions from its rotting rump. The horns bother me a little, but that's nitpicking. I love how badass it seems, despite what appears to be a rather diminutive stature, like a smallish dog. Or... hog, I guess. DogHog? :P

[Fred Rambaud]

Crazy!!

[Guido Kuip (yoitisi)]

Hey thanks :]

William: Yeh I heard that before about the horns. I kinda like the repetition of tusks and horns, but I should've spend a bit more time on them I guess :P

[William B. Hand]

Again: This thing about the horns is not a real issue, it's just something that I thought I would mention since it contrasts with what is an otherwise very strong little study to me.

It's not the repetition that's at issue for me, actually -- I like that aspect. It's just that the shape and description of the horns is not nearly as nicely done as the shape and description of the tusks (or any other part of the pic). The middle-most horn works fine, actually... The left horn -- of each head -- flares out in a way that looks odd, and unbelievable to my eye, and the lack of care in the leftmost one doesn't quite mesh with the other nearby elements of hair and nose.

Ya know... I know that this is just a quick fun sketch, so it's all maybe way too much chatting about it, but when you really like a pic, you tend to linger on it a bit. What's most important is that you created it in the first place, and I feel a little silly for even bringing it up, now. :)

[Guido Kuip (yoitisi)]

Hehe I appreciate the crit though, William :] I might just put a little more work on it even..who knows.

I should post new stuff one of these days anyway.

[Keun Chul (ironbrush)]

wow good~!!